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My one-second of purity

Uncurling, opening,
I want to
Newborn and reborn
Gently knowing, telling in

Silence

Circling the knowledge
Delicate openings
Knowing that

Silence

So warm, loud
Screaming that its
True

In silence
This is real
©2003-2010 ~f1refaery
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i would just like to know what poeple think of this...i dont normally write poetry.....to me this is about catching a glance or making eye contact with someone..

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:icontiryth:
This is gorgeous....

Tiryth
:iconlunabunny:
wow, that's beautifully crafted. All the feeling seems to come from what you don't say, which i suppose is totally appropriate for a poem about eye contact ;) (Wink) The last verse is so true... Clap

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:iconreenamakwana:
this is amazing! all that crap yesterday that you hated poetry - you're a dark horse! xxx

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January 14, 2003

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